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"My poor little Mikey." Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
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Perfectly Imperfect
(#) SyraStrange 2012-01-05
This really sucks. NOT YOUR STORY!!! This whole... huff ...situation. I can't believe how dumb and ignorant Gerard is being, or how unbelievably far off Mikey's mindset is going. Or how unbearably slow Frank's and Pete's efforts toward helping these two are doing, no matter how hard they're trying. It's getting me down a little. Update...pretty please with unicorns and rainbows on top? c:Author's response
Yeah, their situation really does suck at the moment; an ignorant Gerard upsetting pretty much everyone and boyfriends being a little too slow when it comes to sorting crap out.
Sorry that it's getting you down, it really wasn't my intention. Sorry.
I'll try to update tonight.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-01-05
This whole chapter made me aww. Audibly, mind you. Gerard can be SUCH an idiot, so much so that Frank loses his temper. I hope to the MCR gods that he doesn't screw up that much again in the near future. Also, I love it when the chapters are longer-it gives the reader more of a chance to get wrapped up in all the Mikey!
OXOAuthor's response
Gerard definitely does have slightly idiotic tendencies, doesn't he? With regards to him screwing up this bad again.... I have got two ideas about this story; both resulting in (kind of?) happy endings, the only main differences between the two ideas are Gerard's behaviour and how long the story will end up being.
I'm really glad that you didn't mind the length of this chapter; I was really worried that it was way too long and boring.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-01-05
Gerard is a retard for getting Mikey into this whole state. It's gonna take a lot of time for Pete to show Mikey how much he means to him, Gerard and Frank and to improve Mikey's self-esteem. I can't wait to see the next chapter. This was definitley not too boring. I thought it was exciting. I love it. So update soon!Author's response
I definitely agree with you; Gerard is a retard for being like that with Mikey and driving him to be in such a state. Pete's got a lot of work to do...
Thank you very much; I'm sooooo pleased that you liked this chapter! I thought it was boring, but it's really cool to know that you found it exciting!
Thank you sooo much for taking the time to review; it really does mean a lot! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) asialovesrevenge 2012-01-05
D'aaaww. This. Is. Amazing. This story is super well written and has a great plot and is just totally awesome :D This chapter was really great, I can't get over how sweet Pete is, and how much Mikey deserves him, it's just adorable C: I hope they get out of this lame situation though, it sucks that this is how Pete and Mikey have to cuddle. Still, aaaaamaaazing :3 Moremoremoremore! :DAuthor's response
Aw, wow, thank you very much! It's very nice of you to say such complimentary things about this story/chapter, it means so much!
I'm glad that you think Pete is sweet, that's how I was hoping he'd come across as; as just the sort of person that Mikey deserves.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review; you've made me smile! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) MCRmilify 2012-01-05
I'm dying from the cute. There is so much happy and adorable in my head right now.
Just
Pete
Mikey
bahhAuthor's response
:DPerfectly Imperfect
(#) MCRmilify 2012-01-05
I've ranted about Gerard to you and most of my friends enough. I'm just going to focus on the cute right now.
It's like more than cute. I don't even know what to call it. Just cute.
I kinda hope that Mikey has a nightmare so Pete can comfort him, but at the same time I think falling asleep so happy, feeling so loved, should keep the bad thoughts out. But Mikey is known to start doubting things/worrying really quickly...
Oh and somebody better send out a search party for that boy. I'd be freaking out if little Mikey was nowhere to be found all night long. There's no way to know for sure that he made it to Pete's, and Mikey alone is not a good thing. If Gerard isn't worried, he's earned another mental beating.
I really love that Mikey is starting to care about himself a teensy bit. Nowhere near boring, loved this chapterAuthor's response
I'm really pleased that you found this cute; that's sort of what I was aiming for with this (amongst other things).
Your thoughts on the likelihood of a Mikey Way nightmare are really interesting and remarkably close to my own line of thought. On the one hand he's in the arms of Pete, who has just made him feel loved and somewhat happy, but on the other hand he does doubt good things really quickly, and then there's all the stuff that Gerard said to him. I could tell you what will happen but that'd ruin the fun...
I think I'd be freaking out too at the idea of Mikey out on the streets after dark without anyone to look out for him.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a helpful review! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2012-01-06
You really are a talented writer.
I absolutely love Pete's complete honest love for Mikey, because its what Mikey needs.
Author's response
Aw, thank you very much! You've made me smile! :)Perfectly Imperfect
(#) GallonsOfBlood 2012-01-06
Deep breath...
Aaaaand release. God, the things Gerard says and the consequences make me really mad sometimes.
But this was a very cute and cheerful(ish-with the whole situation it's hard for them to actually be cheerful) chapter that's a really good bright spark in the middle of the sadder chapters.Author's response
I'm so pleased that you think this is kinda cheerful, the next chapter is pretty heavy so it's good to know that I've broken it up a little.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :)
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