- Uhh... I loved this! Was the poem by you? It was amazing, do you mind if I copy it down and hang it on my wall? It deserves it, seriously. Poor Frankie, and then Mikey kissed him... gasp
All in all, this was really really good.
Author's responseThank you!! No the poem is very famous and by WH Auden. We were studying it in English and I thought of this, cause it's about an homosexual relationship.
I was originally going to have Mikey punching Frank but then I thought I might had a little extra twist by making Mikey kiss Frank.
Again thank you. And thank you for taking the time to read and review my work very greatly appreciated
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-05-09This is really really sweet at the end. I thought it was quite a twist when Mikey kissed him but I just loved the ending so much. I was actually just studying this poem the other day in English too and I was thinking how well it would fit in with something like this and you made a fantastic job at it. To be honest, I'm not too keen on the poem but I think you made it fit in very well. Great story! :)
Author's responseAwh thank you!
Yeah it is pretty boring. My friend had to write about it in her essay. I chose another poem c:
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