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16- Inside We're Broken
4 reviewsI had washed my hands over and over again yet I could still feel the blood.
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Give My Heart Back
(#) GAClive 2012-01-29
Great chapter. And I'm glad for the somewhat mellow confrontation, it seems more real than so many other similar scenarios I've read on this site that were over blown and cliche.Author's response
Yeah... I kind of figured it would make more sense this way. Plus the way I've written Hayley isn't really all that confrontational. That's about as angry as she'd get with someone she truly cares about.
I love the way I've written her and I honestly wish I could stay so calm lol but no chance for me.
Thank you though! I'm really glad you enjoyed the smaller drama choice.Give My Heart Back
(#) ekad 2012-01-29
I LOVE this story!! please please keep it going!!Author's response
Thank you!
I'm hoping to update soon but I have no intention of abandoning it. =)Give My Heart Back
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-01-29
Haha fail, Kyla. Glad Frank's going to be okay, depite everything. Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next.
SFAuthor's response
Thank you. =)
Hopefully I'll be updating this soon.Give My Heart Back
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2012-02-08
Whoa, Alex is leaving. YES!Author's response
Haha. Such excitement!
I'm glad that turned out in your favor. I did have to get him out of the picture despite my own objections. He's a good guy. I just threw him off of his path. I'm terrible like that.
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