Gerard has what you might call an "identity crises" when he looks in the mirror.
Wow...that was just so touching and realistic. I loved it, even though it made me really upset. The way he couldn`t see the way he had really become in the mirror, made it even more real. The end sentence realy got me, if that makes any sense? You are an amazing writer, one of my favourites on here.Sorry for going on a bit
This gave me chills. The way you descried the metaphor of beautiful Gerard and dying Gerard was so realistic and saddening. The last lines were amazing too, really emotional.
I agree with the others, you're amazing.
Can't you make a two-shot of this? Like, someone in the band notices whats happening.
gets down on one knee will you marry me?
XD what I meant was, beautiful story. The last part was incredible.
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