- That was so much better!!! Thank you for changing it. I disn't write that really mean review on the other version because I wanted it changed, but I'm glad that you did anyway. It's still sad but I like it anyway and you rock royally. Seriously. I loved this entire story and I love you and I love the new version of this chapter. It feels less rushed and makes more sense with the earlier chapters. Thanks again, and I hope you had as much fun writing this as I did reading it.
(#) MemoryWolf 2012-02-02This is the sad but not so sad ending to one of my favourite stories, no matter how lazy I was, I had to log in and review. This story was a wonderful piece of art ! :) you've got the weapon girl! ( wait, you are a girl right? Sry if you aren't, I was- you know what, I'll shut up now) :]
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