The Doctor has no idea who this girl standing with a napsack in his TARDIS is claiming to be his daughter. Why does everyone seem to think they can just burst into his TARDIS? Takes place during th...
I think this would have been a lot better if there was a bit more back story to the whole thing.
Also all the misspellings and typos draw a lot away from what could have been a good idea.
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