A Devil is given an assignment to seduce some good christian teens into a life of sin, if he fails he will be demoted into cleaning toilets for disgusting imps. Little does he know that there is a ...
You have some minor grammatical errors. A lot of your quotes are run-on sentences. Periods and commas go before quotes, not after.
Heh. Baal finally gets mentioned. As long as no one says "suck my Baals,"
I'll be good.
Heh. More later.
Ha ha! I loved it :D Lol Mr. Duck :P
Keep it up :P
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