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Learn to Fly
(#) xvampire-chick97x 2012-02-29
dis chp wz kinda random lyk dis danny who is he lyk kinda wierd rite.
nd nway i tink u cn do bettar. i rly dnt lyk gia bein a bicth 2 lynz lyk do u h8 lynz or sumtin. no wonder u dnt hav ny rewiews lyk i dnt tink ppl lyk u h8in on lynz.Learn to Fly
(#) xvampire-chick97x 2012-02-29
lyk u cud tray addin more drama 2 da store cuz its kinda boren lyk it is. nd nway if ur looken 4 ideas i tink itd be bettar if lukas wsnt tere lyk hes clerly a ass cuz hes chetin. gia cud fell used nd go 2 frank lyk dey wer close b4 nd i tink da reson jamea is mad is bcuz shenows frnk nd gia hav a ting nway i tink it wud b a gud idea. cud give u moar rewiws.Learn to Fly
(#) Heymimusic 2012-02-29
^first of all, you are being clearly out of line. You should've known who Danny was already. Second, the whole tension between Lindsey and Gia is what a typical stepmother-stepdaughter relationship is most of the time. It takes a while to develop. And the whole "no reviews because of LynZ" is complete and utter crap. Lucas needs to be here because he is a big part of the story. And Jamia is just worried about her kids not spending time with their father. Also, learn how to write. Don't go judging other people's stories if you haven't written any yourself.
ANYWAY, let's get back to the main reason I'm writing this review.
I absolutely adored this :) Jersey is so cute and babyish when it comes to his parents :D and I also like him a tiny bit more because he's a connection between Lucas and Gia now. Poor Gia, with her confusing feelings and boy problems (rather, Lucas problems). It nearly broke my heart at her realization at the end.
Can't wait for more ! I'm always checking my email for this story to update :)Learn to Fly
(#) MCR_love 2012-03-08
Janie Y U COME BETWEEN LUCAS AND GIA?!
Seriously though, I love this chapter. You put in all the right emotions and the last sentence was just... amazing. Great chapter.
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