(#) KobraBlaze 2012-04-12You have made me discover my love for Rikeys again. Well your ones anyway. This was so sweet and I loved everything in it. It really shows how Hurt Mikey is feeling and how hurt Ray is feeling that he didn't help him sooner. You made a great job out of this. I loved it to bits!!! :)
Author's responseI hope it's a well-found love! I'm glad you liked it and thought it was sweet; thanks! I'm pleased that all of the hurt came through. Thank you very much! :D
(#) snake56tongue 2012-04-14So adorable!
I know I have said this before, but you truly are amazing at writing vunerable Mikeys :D Your Mikeys are my favourite :)
I love how Ray and Mikeys relationship was all to do with the fairytales, and how you got back to that at the end. I also love how Ray was Mikeys only hope from the bullies, and that Gerard trusted him, and how everything worked out okay in the end :D
I'm relieved that you like my Mikeys, I usually write him as vulnerable so it's really nice to know you think I do it alright! :)
I kept the fairy-tale theme going because I hoped it would give the impression of Mikey still just being a kid and also that everything would work out because fairy-tales always have a "happily ever after". If that makes sense.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D
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