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"Little lost digits in the wind." Lyrics. Feedback hugely appreciated. :)
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(#) snake56tongue 2012-04-14
I think that these lyrics are very beautiful :)
They speak to me on a certain level, y'know? Like, I don't know if this is correct, but to me they mean how people today are grouped together, are just another face in a sea of nameless people, how we don't matter.
I think you are very good at song lyrics :D
P.S. Pencey Prep are awesome :DAuthor's response
Aw, thank you very much!
I'm glad you think that they speak to you, that's something I always aim for whenever I write. Your interpretation is pretty much spot-on; well done! :D
Thank you, it's very kind of you to say. :)
P.S. Yes. Yes they are. :DHello, My Name Is: (Insert Number Here)
(#) RockMusic 2012-04-14
Whenever I read one of your poems. I hardly ever review them (sorry). I just think they'd make amazing songs and I actually composed music to a few by accident(again, sorry). They're just beautiful and amazing, and make great great great lyrics.Author's response
Thank you very much, I'm very pleased that you think they'd make good songs! It's absolutely awesome that you've composed music to them, don't e sorry!
Thank you for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :DHello, My Name Is: (Insert Number Here)
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-04-15
This was beautiful and I;m also really sorry if I spam your reviews box thingy over the next few minutes. I'm stalking your page for a while sooo..Author's response
Thank you very much and please, don't be sorry; I love getting reviews! Happy stalking! ;P
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