(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-04-16This was so sad! I just want to punch Frank. And hug Mikey. The concept was really interesting, because everyone always think of Frank being the good guy. This would make a cool two-shot.
Author's responseSorry that it was so sad! Feel free to punch Frank, I think he kinda deserves it in this. I'm glad you found the concept interesting; I got a little bored of always writing Frank as the knight in shining armor, if you will.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-04-16Awh... The ending was so sad. It just really showed that Mikey had given up Frank who doesn't even realise what he's doing nor Gerard. It was an excellent one shot though. I thought it was really clever and original. Very very very very very good!!!!! I enjoyed reading it. Your writing always catches my attention very well!
Author's responseSorry about the sad ending, but I'm pleased that it go through the point that I was trying to make that Mikey had given up and Frank didn't even really know it.
Thanks for taking the time to review! :)
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-17Gah, this was so sad D; Frank made me want to hit things in this. Preferably him. Really loved your Mikey characterization too...very well written, but what else would have I expected, coming from you? :L Really enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing :)
Author's responseSorry about the sadness. And I kinda wanted to hit Frank too, which is weird because I wrote him like that. ;/
Thank you very much! I'm very glad that you liked the way I did Mikey.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a kind review! :D
(#) snake56tongue 2012-04-21I really like this :)
You can totally feel Mikey's pain, and how he feels about Frank, and it makes me hate both Frank and Gerard a little.
It is wonderfully written, as always :)
This kinda made me hate Frank and Gerard too, which is worrying because I'm the on who wrote it. ;P
Thank you very much! :D
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