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Two For Joy
5 reviews“Uh Gerard this is Frank, he’s staying here for a bit. Frank this is my brother, Gee”
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One For Sorrow
(#) Lizzeh 2012-04-17
yayayay I loved it (: I'm glad they're getting along woo!
update soooon!!!
-lizzie xoAuthor's response
I'm so glad
Tuesday is the magic day! C:One For Sorrow
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-04-18
This is brilliant! I can't wait to read more- I'm loving Gerard's character in this, the way he's such a social outcast, yet still quirky and interesting in his own way. I can't wait to find out more about Frank's character either xD
Eagerly awaiting your next update! :D
CosmicZombie xoAuthor's response
Thank you! :D I'm glad you like him! There shall be a lot more Frank on the way so I hope not to disappoint C:
You shall see it around soon!One For Sorrow
(#) hopesmells 2012-04-18
w00t. Third review that means you have to update on Tuesday :DAuthor's response
Dehe it does and I shall!
thanks for reviewing C:One For Sorrow
(#) jack-the-ripper 2012-04-18
Great chapter!
About the like thing, I started thinking about that after I submited the review and it makes sense lol,
it's also really cool that you took the time to answer my review and explain it to me. And don't get me wrong - I really like your style of writing this :)Author's response
Thank you!
Ah good haha! It was no problem, I believe if you've taken the time to leave such a lovely and helpful review the least I can do is reply C:
Thanks again xDOne For Sorrow
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-05-22
This is actually brilliant. I don't think I've read a fanfiction in 2nd person present tense but it really works. The writing is genius, really natural but like...yeah. I loved this:
“-cause people seem to have all these little loops and settings in their heads and like some of it’s the simple stuff like not walking under ladders or keeping the volume at an even number on your TV, but then it’s the same for bigger things too like how everyone thought for so long sitting next to someone with AIDs on the bus could kill you and no one seems to even notice how stupid our brains are”
That whole paragraph just made me sit back and say "Huh."
SFAuthor's response
So literally logging on to these reviews is the best way to end a day like ever
Also I don't actually know what 2nd person present tense is (/I'm dumb I know/) so I'm gonna google the shit out of that now!
I'm so glad!
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