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Of Fairies And Fairy Tales
1 reviewIt seemed that Ed was leading a life too crazy to be compared with fairy tales without it all turning creepy.
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Of Fairies And Fairy Tales
(#) ukeueue 2006-08-03
Cute!
Good characterization of Ed, there.
There are a few minor spelling/grammar errors, but nothing a beta reader can't fix. :)Author's response
thank you very much for reviewing. It was especially useful as I hadn't noticed that I published the unbetaed version which was as you noticed miserably full of mistakes. The good one is now up and it should be a big progress. I am glad you managed to appreciate the story anyway and proud you liked my Ed ^^
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