(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-04-28This was excellent. The last couple of lines were really good, and the piece as a whole was well written (as usual). I think this might make a cool two-shot, like how they would react if they were caught. Anyway, loved it!
Author's responseThank you very, very much; I'm really happy that you think it's alright!
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