(#) paradoxicalcynic 2012-05-03Enjoying this story very muchly :)
The plot is great and you have so many paths to take! Not to mention your fantastic writing that will mean, no matter where this story goes - its gonna be written rather superbly!
I will be consistently checking for an update :P :)
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-05-04Oh my lanta this made me lol.
"I'll put some lentils in." What, just add some to a still thoroughly MEAT lasagna? And then "everyone's grandma dies"; kinda started like the intro to some kinda charity advert. We rescue grandmas!
Kidding aside, you're being down on yourself. This was a really good chapter, I'm glad we saw the deepening of Gerard and Frank's relationship. And Lindsey poses some interesting questions too. Can't wait for the update!
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-08-12Third review on this chapter, I realise but what ever I'm re reading this story because it makes me giggle and I keep quoting bits to my Mom instead if like actually conversing with her and also I can't believe how like brief my last review was I didn't swear at you at all nor did I use any terrible slang whilst describing my life. Crazy. Hmm, I used to be such a formal little thing (all those weeks ago.....) anyhooo the lentils bit made me crack up all over again and Lindsey is scary but also I love her and I don't want her to be hurt so when g and frank go off to have sexy times can I keep her? Dhudhdishxusi
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