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Playing with power
(#) MCRfreak15 2012-05-05
please don't let the next chapter be the last!! D:
i want this story to go on forever :DAuthor's response
Sadly it can't go on forever XD But updates will be up soon :')
xoPlaying with power
(#) andreajp 2012-05-05
I can see this ending about 3 different ways, and knowing you, it isn't even worth guessing because you'd pull a surprise #4 out of you hat. I'm preparing the tissues just in case though. Christ, that's the price you pay for reading mafia fics am right?
What kind of sick weirdo am I that I actually got teary eyed while reading.....
/“Another thing I will no longer be letting slip is you calling me Gerard.” Gerard continued. “You are to call me Master or Sir. If you ever slip up, even once, even if it’s a mistake, I won’t be forgiving.” Gerard gazed at Frank with intense eyes, Frank trying not to let his chest heave as sobs threatened to break from his throat. “Is that clear?”
“Y – Yes sir.” Frank whispered....../
Whether it be the end the next chapter or really soon or 5 more, I'm looking forward to itAuthor's response
It is indeed :') I can't even think of 3 ways to end this so odds are I'm not gonna surprise you, but I hope I do ;)
You're not a sick weirdo, you're... connecting with... Gerard? XD
Hopefully the next chapter wont disappoint :)
xoPlaying with power
(#) MCRnum1fan97 2012-05-05
I agree with MissFilthyDivineMCR
Total suspense music - ’’ “Jamia,” He smiled, nodding his head. “My name is Bert, but you can call me Mr. McCracken.” He purred, walking over to her and gently taking her hand. Jamia repressed a shudder as Bert lifted her hand and pressed a faux charming kiss to her knuckles. “Now... let’s go get this friend of yours, shall we?” ‘’
nooooo!!!!!!!!!
please please dont let the next chapter be the last i am completely addicted to this story and i might die if it ends so quickly. (without sounding like a drama queen... to late.)
please give us more chapters i mean look at this huge response to your story you are just too much of an amazing writer (if thats even possible)
OhMyGerard! so much drama i love this story and cant wait for the next update. and i hope that my internet wont get cut off again cuz that was a really pain in the ass.
holly shit it's so fun to read all the other reader's comments on this story every chapter. there are so many different opinions on the plot and characters i love it! because with most other freard stories every body want the freard wrecker to die/get killed or just disappear from the story. but with this there is the people wanting a freard ending and for Jamia to bugger off. others for and ending where Frank gets his freedom and Jamia and one fabulous person thats just routing on for Mikey. personally i hope that Frank gets his freedom and can pick who he wants to be with but i doubt thats gonna be the ending.
Author's response
Ah please don't die when it ends XD I have to say the response to this story has been bigger than I ever dreamed it would be and I'll be sad to see it end too, but all good things must come to an end...
Hopefully the ending won't disappoint and your internet will hold out long enough to see it :') It should be up soon so just keep sticking around xD
xoPlaying with power
(#) KillerKilo 2012-05-08
GAH!!! NO!! Jamia cant do that! Frank and Gerard are going to get better right? Shes just going to mess it up :( PLease update soon!Author's response
Ahh you'll have to wait and find out ;) Updates should be up soon :)
xo
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