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The road to recovery. (Or so we think...)
(#) RockMusic 2012-05-04
Gah! Hey you amazing writer you... Get this letter to fictional Mikey for me?
"Dear Mikey,
1) Though you love Gerard, you should never feel guilty about trusting someone else besides/more than him.
2) Its never a shame to ask for help.
3) You are NOT a burden.
4) Honesty is the best policy when with those you can trust.
5) .... Those feelings your feeling in that stuck place... YOU LOVE FRANK! I'm telling you right now. I'm telling you like I tell Bella she really loves Jacob. You LOVE Frank!!!
6) I know where you live.... love Frank... grrrr
7) I'm not threatening
8) your really cool.....
Love, Destiny "
Awesome chapter. Mikes had a bit of a panic attack there. I'm kind of doing this twilight thing, where I know how it will end (in this case I don't) but I pick a team anyway and just fantasize about it... haha. Sorry you had a bad day, it gets better and it didn't affect your writing so that's very good. Very few spelling mistakes/typos.Author's response
Firstly, thank you very much. I wouldn't call myself much of a writer but it makes me feel really good when you appreciate my writing.
I wish I could get that letter to Mikey. You definitley picked up on all the things that he is lacking in thinking of. I'm very glad you liked the chapter. I like the sound of the twilight thing. It is actually still a mystery to me also as to who will win Mikey! Thank you very very much. I certainly feel much better after reading your review.
Also, sorry about the typos. It's just that auto-correct on my iPod can be really stupid sometimes and the keyboard is quite small. Sorry for any confusions in it! :/The road to recovery. (Or so we think...)
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-05-05
Sorry it took me so long to review this, I've just had a lot going on. Anyways...
Great chapter! I loved how you made Mikey have a kind of panic attack, it really showed that he's still nervous as he used to be, even if he has improved a little with help from Frank and Gerard. Pete's reaction to Mikey's bruises/scars was perfect; it clearly got across to the reader how much he cares about Mikey and his longing to help almost bought a tear to my eye. I think that Mikey feeling bad about trusting Pete like this is very interesting and I can foresee it causing problems later on down the line.
Great job and I can't wait for more! :DAuthor's response
Thanks. No problem!
I'm very glad that you saw how Mikey is still nervous in certain situations through the panic attack. I was hoping for this point to come through without over doing it. I'm also very happy that you enjoyed Pete's reaction to seeing Mikey's scars and saw how much he really cares. I hope I didn't jerk any sad tears!!! Mikey does feel bad about trusting Pete and it will definitley have an effect later on. I'm very very happy you liked it. The next chapter should be up soon! :)
Thank you for reading and leaving a really nice review!
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