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Deadly Deception
6 reviewsBrendon's lost control; he's finally cracked. Read, review, rate and feel my love! :P
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Speechless
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-05-23
NO! WHY BRENDON, WHY?! Poor Mikey, he's going to be so sad! Please update this soon! I beg of you! In the name of Mikey Way's dick!
This was very well written; the internal battles of 'No! I'm dating Mikey!' and 'But Ryan's hot..' really added to it.
Please update soon!!!!! PLEASE!
OXOAuthor's response
I think that's what Mikey's wondering too. And Brendon, for that matter.
Yep; Mikey is not gonna be happy.
Mikey Way's dick?! I better get to updating then! But it probably won't be up until tomorrow.
Thank you very much! :DSpeechless
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-05-23
I know that i already reviewed this and I'm really sorry for wasting your time. But, in my haste to beg you to update this soon, I ignored the authors note like an idiot. So basically, Im bugging you again (sorrysorrysorry!) to suggest that the next chapter be in Petes POV. Maybe mikey running to him and pete's reaction? I dunno. Sorry to bother you.Author's response
You haven't wasted my time at all, in fact, you've been extremely helpful!
That's what I was thinking of doing, so I'm glad you agree! And I think Stumpy will be present too.
Thanks for taking the time to help me out! :DSpeechless
(#) Mikeyunicornrawr 2012-05-23
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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POOR MIKEY DXAuthor's response
:D
Yeah, poor Mikes! ;PSpeechless
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-05-24
No, Brendon! Why?! Why would you do that? This is so exciting and my heart is beating so fast! Poor Mikey. I really loved this the whole way through! It rally had me wondering if Brendon was actually interested in Ryan. The ending was brilliant. You finished it at the most perfect, yet at the most agonizingly painful part. I really am excited to see what happens next. Poor poor mikey. Absolutely amazing. Please update soon!Author's response
I think that's what everyone's thinking at the moment, Brendon himself included. I'm really pleased that you found this exciting and not too boring as that is something I always worry about whenever I write something. Thank you very, very much and yes; poor Mikey!
Thanks for reviewing! :DSpeechless
(#) MyChemicalRomance10 2012-05-24
just an amazing story and i cant believe brendon did that mikey!! cant wait for an update!!Author's response
Thank you very much! :D
I don't think Brendon can believe it himself.
Update will be up shortly! :)Speechless
(#) Kaleidoscope_Eyes 2012-05-25
Oh-Em-freaking-Gee! I hate Ryan, like so much right now. Fucking dick, ruining Mikey's relationship with Brendon. Killabitch. lol This chapter was great :3Author's response
Wow. I'm kinda scared for Ryan's safety right now. ;P
Thank you very much! :D
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