Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > i want this
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i want this
(#) Heartbreak_Beauty 2012-05-27
A little word of advice: In your summary/title, try to use capitalization. It turns the readers attention onto the story.
The smut was good, had some spelling mistakes, but that's ok.
By the way the 2nd chapter is written, it seems like someone else written it.
Please, get a beta. If you need one, here's my email-
ilovelezlezandryry@gmail.com
Thanks!Author's response
ok i take your points into concideration thanks
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