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Birthday Wish
6 reviewsIts Ritsuka's birthday, and he's made a wish. But that wish is so special to him that he won't jinx it by telling anyone what it was - not even Soubi. Slight Soubi/Ritsuka
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Birthday Wish
(#) RenoLotus 2006-07-08
If this is the standard of your writing always, I can't wait to read more. I think it was very well put together and also kept all characters involved, actually in character!
Well done, I'd love to read more :DBirthday Wish
(#) Regina 2006-09-06
Oh, that was so beautiful. ;___; I loved the little moment between them in Ritsuka's room, and his wish at the end that he wouldn't tell (of course he wouldn't want to jink that one! :D). Thank you for sharing. It was very lovely. :)Birthday Wish
(#) SofiaDragon 2006-10-24
This is so sweet, and very true to character. Thank you for writing it.Birthday Wish
(#) SeekingOnlyOurSanity 2008-03-29
Excelent writing style. I really liked Ritsuka's admission to what he wished for at the end of the story. I feel, however, I must point out only one thing. In one of the manga (volume 6 or 7, I beleive), it is revealed that Ritsuka's birthday is in the middle of Winter, only a few days before Christmas. That was the onyl mistake I caught, and other than that tiny fluke, it was an excellent story.
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