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The Night Before
57 reviewsThe night before Bill and Fleur's wedding was one that Harry would remember vividly for a long time...
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The Night Before
(#) jamie 2006-07-08
that was great. u should post it on fanfiction.net or somethingThe Night Before
(#) darkschw 2006-07-09
Thanks for writing this.
I do hope that you decide to continue it because it is very intriguing.
Of course, I’d like to see a little more smut, but that’s just me.
By the way, thanks for reviewing my work.The Night Before
(#) apocalypso 2006-07-11
NICE!
Hahahaa...that was a pretty sneaky little idea. Making Fleur promise herself as a slave to Harry until the wedding...only that there will BE no wedding! :D
If I understood correctly, Bill will die at Mistress Shadow's hands (erm...you really could have selected a better name for her :P) so Fleur, basically, is Harry's slave for the rest of her life :D
Great fic, and very hot...I wonder if my pleading you will make you write a long smut scene or 500 of them? :)
Good luck writing, I hope you continue this fic.
-apocalypsoThe Night Before
(#) adamwild1 2006-07-11
very delicious. Smut ahoy!
i love the twist.
I do hope you continue this story.The Night Before
(#) yojorocks 2006-07-12
I loved this, and hope, no, pray that you do a follow up chapter (or two puppy eyes) to this. I have never seen anything quite like this idea and applaude you for you ingenuity. Please continue!The Night Before
(#) Sferics 2006-07-13
Good beginning, it has a much more creative start that most stories out there. I hope that it continues to be as good.The Night Before
(#) darkflog 2006-07-13
I loved it! There is alot of potential in this one-shot. Hope you continue this!The Night Before
(#) Nautilus 2006-07-14
Ingenious... as far as i can tell u intend to keep the story alive and continue it (to which i wait).
still a bit confussed on who u exactly killed in the story.
1. Could Bill be Tonk's Ex. That will solve the Fleur issue.
2. Is Remus beheaded, Harry was 'worrying' about him, that means, that Tonks could join Harry. (but no Fleur)
3. Or are they all dead???
Well i hope to find out soon. Update, both ur stories ASAP please.
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