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Sakura's private healing
Naru/harem the girls wanna show their "Appreciation" for saving the village
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Pile Of Lemons
(#) dragonwarz50 2012-06-21
It was pretty good.
You just have to work on your spellingAuthor's response
yea i know what u mean, it's part of the reason why i havent updated, i'm lookin all over the chaps and working on the new chaps as wellPile Of Lemons
(#) ItachiSasu 2012-08-01
Amazing, and I love the way you have Tayuya as she is one of my favorite female characters In Naruto and I thought they could of done so much more with her, which you did! The only thing that I think you should consider (other than doing a few spelling checks before submitting a chapter) Is give them a little more free will as Tayuya completely and utterly broke which I don't think is very likely considering she is a very hot tempered person, but otherwise I love it all.Pile Of Lemons
(#) ItachiSasu 2012-08-01
Wrong story so ignore what I said. lol sorry I went on a huge rant and It's not even the right story.Pile Of Lemons
(#) RforReader 2012-08-07
It's so awesome that you uploaded this again, even though FF deleted it.. I hope you will get up the other chapters as well, because if you do, I will read them over and over again :DPile Of Lemons
(#) SamuelKeller 2012-08-26
Well I finally found this damn thing. I, like RforReader right above me, say this on FF and was blown away. So you are the original Naruto lemon writer. A guy can't walk three feet without your story being referenced! It's pretty damn good man. I think you need to work on spelling though. Sorry if that was just salt on wounds.
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(#) JuicyFruit21 2012-10-13
Hey, loved the story on FF.Net, shame they took it down, about how frequently do you think you can update them?Pile Of Lemons
(#) DallasRocks 2016-01-30
This is a work of art that would may issei and Jiraiya proud
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