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Erotic Display
2 reviewsShe tried to stop loving him, to rid her mind of him. He failed to find fault in what made her perfet to him. Yet one night, a display of pure sensuality breaks his vow to never mate a mortal.
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Erotic Display
(#) CreationofDarkness 2017-06-11
That was beautiful. I absolutely loved it. The only thing I have for you to adjust is your transitions between POV's. Other than that, you are an awesome writer and just need a good editor.
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