(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-06-19This was both terrifying an enthralling at the same time. At first, I thought that Mikey was still alive and that he was simply a manipulative bastard. But then I got to the end, facepalmed, and reminded myself of what a good writer you are. It was really interesting to see Waycest interpreted like this; normally it's just the two of them and one is extremely controlling an uses that ability to control the other, or they're hiding their love. You know, stuff along those lines.
But making one of them dead, and therefore driving the other insane, was absolutely brilliant.
This was another example of your excellent writing.
Author's responseThank you very much! I'm kinda glad this sort of kept you guessing and wasn't too obvious about who was alive/dead/insane, so I hope it wasn't confusing to the point of being stupid. I do enjoy reading Waycest but, like you said, there is a pretty much generic formula to most of them; I should know, I use it most of the time (I usually make Gerard the controlling one or have Mikey hiding his love), but I really wanted to do something at least a little different with this.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely, long review! :D
- I'm speechless. At least, I would be if it wasn't particularly counter-productive when trying to write a review. This was absolutely phenomenal. It was incredibly unique and moving, not to mention the fact the writing was absolute perfection. The ending gave me shivers and that hasn't happend with a story, particularly fanfiction, for a very long time. Just, woah! I can genuinely say this was a pleasure to read.
Author's responseWow; thank you very, very much! There honestly aren't words good enough to describe how grateful I am for this lovely, kind review; seriously, it's made me smile like an idiot!
Thanks for reviewing! :D
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-06-28I hate waycest with a burning passion (no, SERIOUSLY) but I thought this was excellent. Genuinely moving, perfect writing and actually pretty scary for the most part. And the way you drew it all together at the end was absolutely fantastic. It was great, well done.
Author's responseThank you very much! I understand why you might hate Waycest, so it really means a lot that you liked this! Thanks for reviewing! :D
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