(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-06-25I really like this story but the end was pretty weird with all of the acceptance, fairly unrealistic.
If it had spacing then it would have been a lot easier to read.
Other than those two things it was pretty good, though I doubt this story could ever have a 'bad' chapter... it's such an interesting idea and I love how you've played it out!
(#) SimplexMinded 2012-06-27wait so...is this the end or....more chapters? please say more chapters...this is so awesome :)
Author's responseThere will be a part two, and it might even be better than this!
It'll be up as in the next few days, I thought about taking a hiatus from this storyline and working on a different one buttfuckit, I'll just upload both!
- I have had this saved onto my favourites for ages but have never got round to reviewing! I just wanted to say what a unique and beautiful read this way! I love the description and the fact the story is so different to any thing else I have ever read. It was very interesting and in a strange way was beautiful, though you must be careful not to misunderstand me I am not a murderer! But it was a lovely read and I hope there will indeed be a part two? You are a fantastic writer and I will definitely be reading more of your stuff!
Author's responseWhy thank you dear, don't worry I'm not a murderer either (just a bit weird/evil)the next couple of chapters for part2 will be posted tonight!
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