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Sleeping Beauty
4 reviewsGerard falls asleep and annoys the heck out of Frank. My first fanfic! Oneshot, Fredrard
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Sleeping Beauty
(#) TheLittleSinner 2012-06-26
D'aww. This was fucking adorable, bro. My only suggestions are to perhaps work a bit more on formatting the paragraphs, and lengthening it? Cuz I mean, fuck. I definitely want to read more of your stuff.Author's response
Yeah, thanks for reveiwing! My mission is now going to be to find a way to fix the paragraphing, and to expand my one-shots. Thanks!Sleeping Beauty
(#) KelseyChem 2012-06-26
It was adorable, but the grammar and paragraphing was kinda wonky.
Cute though ^-^Sleeping Beauty
(#) GreenDaySavedMyLife 2012-06-26
This was really cute, I just wish you had developed it more. The grammar and the way you spaced the story was a little bizarre. xoxo-SM
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