Oneshot. "Their lips touched so lightly that if their eyes had been closed they may not have even realised they had kissed." *Frerard* [Music and Words]
That was just....wow. Heartbreakingly beautiful. I really expected Frank not to kill Gerard, but PLOT TWIST! Great job!
That was amazing! I loved the idea, really original. It was well written too, I did not expect the ending. x
Oh my... This is just.... Wow... This literally took my breath away. The heartbreak... Just stunning. Thank you for writing this.
Ohmygod. That...wow...That was so damn good. I loved your dark imagery and description, and the deceptive twist you gave it with Frank and Gerard's temporary closeness- this bit I found particularly effective; 'Each fine pencil stroke seemed to add to the horror and loneliness which screamed out of the drawing, and Frank felt an odd clenched feeling in his chest as he wondered if Gerard truly felt that way, if this beautiful angelic boy was hurting inside.' The end took my breath away. It was so dark and twisted, but so fucking good. Thank you so much for posting!
So dark and so beautiful.
It. Was. so......beautiful. Idk, just something about it. It was so good. You definitely deserved it going green.
no... no... NO!!!!!!!! FRANK YOU CAN"T FRICKING KILL GERARD!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved the story by the way...
Omfg. This story is just so... omfg. It's amazing.
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