(#) Hostile_Halo 2012-07-12I was debating between rating up for 'hot' and 'funny' but leaned towards 'funny' because frank's side thoughts made me laugh so much xD
Author's responselol yay thank you, i was worried that maybe frank was thinking too much and was gonna cut down, but since you like them im gonna contine in the same style,
in the next update there's finaly going to be some dialogue:) (don't know why i said that, just letting you know lol)
again thank you for the R&R:)
(#) BleedingValentine 2012-07-13Heeheehee. This made me giggle. I think it's pretty cool, interesting new perspective ;) Thank god you have a good sense of grammar. Some people don't. I love you for your ability to write coherently, and it made me laugh, so two bonus points :)
Author's response:) Thank you, yay 'bonus points' lol. I totally feel loved, I’m so happy it made you giggle. I always try and use correct grammar and it feels good to know someone noticed yay. Again thank you for the review.
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-08-08Warm, waaaaarm, ooh warmer...BOILING HOT!
Yes, I'm very pleased I decided to reside into typical hormonal teenage girl today. And yesterday. And the day before.
...Omigod, look it's that advert with the meerkats!! Oh, please come home Sergei!
Author's response:) heeheehee, thanks.
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