(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-07-15Oh, this was so sad.
I want to hug Patrick now than I did previous to reading this. I could just imagine the whole thing in my head, and I imagine I was making a sad puppy face at my laptop.
Your stories are so always so well written, and thorough, and just generally wonderful. A lot of people just write sad stories that are vague and sad, and just describe the emotions and give no back story as to what sparked these emotions. But when you write it as you did, then it just makes for an excellently sad Peterick.
That sounded really morbid..
Author's responseSorry about the sadness.
I always want to hug Patrick. And Pete. And Mikey (but that's irrelevant).
Thank you very much! It really means a hell of a lot to me that you think so highly of my writing; thank you!
Thanks for taking the time to leave such a lovely, kind review! :D
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-07-15Oh, by the way, I was wondering-what did you imagine happening to Pete and Patrick after this? I'm just curious, and I'm not going to be a demanding slutface and request that you continue two different stories, but it's honestly bugging me.
Sorry for reviewing twice...
Author's responseI kinda pictured Patrick as killing himself pretty soon after leaving. I think Pete goes insane, like he won't leave the hoodie or the apartment and he won't believe it when anyone tells him that Patrick is gone. Eventually, he will die too. Yes; my head is overflowing with sunshine and rainbows.
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