(#) BipolarUnicorn 2012-07-16I love this so much! He broke Yoda >.< This. Was. Adorable. This was fantastic! I live Frikey :3 its so cute! Hehe I like when it said Frank turned Mikey from a prince to a princess. This was amazing :)
Author's responseThank you very much; I'm extremely happy that you liked this!
Bad Frankie, breaking Yoda. I love Frikey too; it was my first ever OTP and I still have quite the soft-spot for it now.
Thanks for such a nice review! :D
(#) youcanstakemyheart 2012-07-16This was too adorable! The 'gooey icky feelings'made me laugh so hard. You did a great job of getting into the mind of an eight year old, and this entire thing was just so enchanting!
Author's responseThanks! I'm glad it made you laugh; most of my fics are way too serious nowadays.
Thanks again! :D
(#) tortillachip 2012-07-17I love this so much!!! It's so sweet and amazing and everything about it is just wonderful. I think this is written really well and really displays a sense of love and growth in Frank. Like, as Frank is with Mikey getting older, he learns more about love, and being with Mikey allows him to learn about growing up. Doing things you don't want to do is part of growing up. For example, Frank was afraid of the Christmas dinner coming ahead and he really was contemplating running away just because of the trouble he knew would probably be coming, but because he loved Mikey and it would just be best to act mature, he stayed and decided to try his hardest to get through the day. I hope this makes sense. Anyway, I also thought it was really sweet that fifteen year old Frank was so upset about not being able to get a gift for Mikey. And of course Mikey doesn't mind. Being with Frank is enough, but that all just produced the best gift of all. An amazing relationship that led to an amazing family. I really liked that they had a child in this. I haven't read too many stories where Frank and Mikey have a kid, but I think those kinds of stories are very cute. I wish I could say more, but I think I'm just so amazed by this that I just don't know what to say. Anyway, beautiful job!!!
Author's responseThank you very much! I'm extremely happy that you liked it and found it to be sweet/amazing/wonderful; it really means a lot!
I'm glad that the sense of growth came through because that is something I really wanted to be made clear; with each year they both age, grew and fell in love that little bit more. I'm happy you got the point about Frank staying through the dinner because, even though he desperately didn't want to, he knew it was something that meant a lot to Mikey.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a kind, detailed review! :D
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-07-19Super super cute and adorable. I love how Mikey only let Frank play with Yoda. Just showed how much Mikey really liked Frank. Perfectly adorable and just... :D Perfect as usual!
Author's responseThank you very much! Pleased you got the point about Yoda and what the little green guy meant.
(#) snake56tongue 2012-07-21OMG, I'm going to die from how adorable this is... how have I survived so long without you wonderful writing?!
It's perfect, and you write Frikey so well. Again, I like how you wrote it in third person :D
And I love how Frank was upset by being such a bad friend, and how Mikey was always forgiving him, and then the kiss!
And omg, their child, and the last line was so perfect, and oh, wow, you've turned me into a illiterate mess :)
Author's responseNoooooo! Please don't die! ;P
Thank you very much, though I highly doubt that this is perfect. I'm starting to enjoy writing third person, so I'm glad that you like reading it that way. :)
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