(#) mychemicalpony 2012-07-25I think this story is great, keep it up! The grammar is a bit iffy, maybe you should find a beta reader? But overall, it's really good and I love the way you worked I'm Not Okay and Teenagers and Blood into it :) is there gonna be more? Because I honestly am gripped on this story, I can't wait to find out what happens between Frank and Gerard XD Keep it up,
(#) TheBlackParadeIsDead 2012-07-25Oh my, thank you very much both of you :3
So if the grammar is weird, it's because I'm french, and writing in english is kinda hard ^^'
I guess my beta reader didn't see the mistakes...
And of course there's gonna be more, I just have to translate the original ?(in french) first ^^
I'll try to update as soon as possible :D
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