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• the changing seasons of my life Maybe I'll get it right next time chapter one

  (#) CourtneylovesKurt105 2012-07-27

  It's not spelling issues you have. You have grammar issues. So many too. My advice, use Spell Check. It's very illiterate. It really distracted me from the story itself I'm saddened to say. BUT, at the parts that I could actually pay attention at I must say, you do have potential as a writer. Your skills will soar if just edited, though. I don't quite get the whole fight scene between that guy. I do hope you plan on building on that and explaining a little more. Overall, good story. Very interesting plot. I do hope you continue you :)

  Author's response

  thanks for the review i know it has alot i will redo promise and with fight scene my mom might say something if i wrote it too extreame but i will add more detail its hard but i will redo it and make it better and thanks for not ripping me to shreads and junk im still working on it so ... it will be better :D "when in dubt try try again"

• the changing seasons of my life Maybe I'll get it right next time chapter one

  (#) MrsAxlRose 2012-08-14

  Wow made me want to cry! It has a lot of emotion in it! Well done and I can see that this story will go far :)

• the changing seasons of my life Maybe I'll get it right next time chapter one

  (#) RockNRollGal 2012-08-15

  Wow, this story has it fill on emotions. Talk about deep, heavy stuff. Wow, just wow. It's a very good, very interesting story so far. I love how you ended it, it just creates suspense. You know, that's what really grabs the readers attention and keeps them wanting more. I also love the conflict between Axl and Slash, and I really hope you will continue this story. I love this.

• the changing seasons of my life Maybe I'll get it right next time chapter one

  (#) RavenTelekinesis 2013-02-22

  OMG! Slash...Axl.. This made me want to cry, I loved it.

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