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Newton's Third Law of Magic
40 reviewsIf ‘for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction’ were partially applied to magic….
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Newton's Third Law of Magic
(#) Cateagle 2012-08-11
After re-reading, I can't help but wonder how these revelations are going to affect Harry & Hermione's relationships with Ron and Molly Weasley; rather negatively, I'd expect (wonder if there will be any legal repercussions from their censoring the letters?). I do have to wonder how Albus feels about himself and Severus being set-up the way he normally manipulates people, it has to hurt to have your games played against you.Author's response
legal against Ron? No, but I would bet he'd have a pretty lonely last few years at Hogwarts. Molly? Maybe. I'm sure Dumbledore would still believe he was justified in doing whatever, even if he regretted having to do so (in his opinion)Newton's Third Law of Magic
(#) overdog001 2012-08-12
DrT always delivers the bacon. Yummy bacon, mmmmm. Good job, T.Author's response
RE: bacon; you sound like my nephew!
Bacon=good!Newton's Third Law of Magic
(#) bkfriend 2012-08-13
Another good story. I check from time to time just to see if anything new shows. I liked this particular story because it is one that doesn't get used much. However, it also felt a little rushed I thought there could have been more written but that is just me. You are the author and I will read and enjoy what you write whether it is 500 words or 500,000. Anyway, again, thanks for the entertainment and I will keep looking for the next story.
BrianAuthor's response
I don't know about rushed, but no, it wasn't as fully developed as it could have been. Just a rotund plot bunny out for a hop around the garden!Newton's Third Law of Magic
(#) Darkmark66 2012-08-16
This was really good a nice way to deal with Riddle and the followers and a good twist regarding Harry and his magic now he will be left alone. I am pleased the Goblins will not take his gold.
I am pleased at the fate of the Dursley's, the Dementors and what was said about Albus the leader of the light.
‘custody of the eyes’ was a good detail to include.
Thanks for this.Author's response
The goblins wouldn't have taken the gold, they would have blocked Harry from access if he was judged non-magical until a magical Potter heir could claim itNewton's Third Law of Magic
(#) cold2 2012-08-17
Very, very nice! New and extremely well written, thought out and executed. Thank you for posting this!Author's response
Thanks!Newton's Third Law of Magic
(#) eldani 2012-08-26
Thanks for posting this one-shot, I really enjoyed it.
Does that newly posted story mean that you're writing again, after you've been silent for the most part of the last year?Author's response
Trying to find the time and inspirition to do a longer storyNewton's Third Law of Magic
(#) badboy1cdx 2012-08-29
Another great story!
One of the things I like about most of your stories is the inclusion of other magical cultures/the international, etc. We get so little information from canon about other magical cultures that I really enjoy when an author takes it upon himself to explore the possibilities.
Anyway, keep up the great work and can't wait for your next offering!Author's response
Thanks! I'm working on a story now, but I want to see how far I can take before posting. I don't want one where I've painted myself into a bad corner!Newton's Third Law of Magic
(#) Fabuz 2012-09-18
Very original and well written, if a bit short for my taste. A-Newton's Third Law of Magic
(#) LabRat 2012-09-29
As expected of one of your fics, simply brilliant. You also gave an idea about how I can have Harry keep parsletongue w/o the horcrux.
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