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I Shouldnt Love You
(#) xXxILoveFrankIeroxXx 2012-08-03
:( Poor Frankie. See, when he was walking to school I was expecting Gerard to pop out of no where.. but nope, he ends up being Frank's english teacher! Who woulda thought?
I really did like this and I have so many things running through my mind.. one of those things being, did Gerard kill the real english teacher?!?!?!Author's response
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(#) coffeekid 2012-08-03
Oh my god this is actually really really awesome >.<
No seriously, i can't wait for an update xD
HURRY UP AND UPDAAATEEEEEE!Author's response
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(#) RockMusic 2012-08-03
I actually had a feeling I was sitting there before reading and my first thought was... Gerard's his teacher. I'm a great guesser. Haha. Great chapter.Author's response
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(#) foreverfalling 2012-08-04
BRILLIANT!
I LOVE this. It's so unique and I'm really excited to read more. But... he was only ten. =/ That's sad... yet I'm still reading.Author's response
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(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-08-04
Okay baby Frankie isn't so much of a baby anymore so that's good but Gerard is still in my bad books because how could anyone hurt that little face?
It's strange cause normally whatever his downfall I love Gerard as like a villain but he really gives me the creeps in this so I can't wait to see how it progresses into a Frerard.
I really enjoyed this chapter anyhow the only thing that bothered me again was the way the dialog was set out. Normally it's a new paragraph for a new speaker but like I had problems with that when I first started on Ficwad so don't worry about it too much.
Great chapter- I'm really exited about this story!Author's response
I think I know what you mean by the dialog bit... Thats what my english teacher has to constantly try and explain to me :')
Thanks for reviewing :3I Shouldnt Love You
(#) lalatherapist16 2012-08-04
I squeeeed so loud when I saw you added a chapterAuthor's response
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(#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-08-06
NO! You can't update within three weeks! I'm addicted! GAHAuthor's response
Im sorry D:I Shouldnt Love You
(#) mychemicalpony 2012-08-07
HE CAN'T HURT FRANKIE NOOOOO Oh my god I wonder what'll happen when Frank stays behind after class... And no update for 3 weeks? I don't think I'll be able to survive D:Author's response
Im sorry D:I Shouldnt Love You
(#) XxSearchAndDestroyxX 2012-08-07
Just, amazing. Do keep writing. I will anxiously await your next update =D
xoxo
XxSearchAndDestroyxX
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(#) KilljoyOnFire 2012-08-10
>.< poor Frankie!!! But great chapter.Author's response
Thank you C:
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