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Too Damn Pretty
11 reviewsOne shouldn't be allowed to be that pretty. No. I wouldn't allow it.
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Too Damn Pretty
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-08-06
Did he... Did he KILL him?! O_____o i did not expect that from the title XD
That said, i really liked it. The way you described him was very detailed and described his beauty accurately :P
~BulletproofNinja xoAuthor's response
Nooo, he's not dead. I read it over and it does sound like he killed him huh? xD
The little incident with Frankie boy just made him introverted and scared anddd- I think I'll just make this a storylike thingy so I can explain everything. This should be fun! :'D
Misleading titles rule! Luring you in with cuteness, then throwing acid in your face. It's weirdly fun.
I'm glad you liked it though. It really means a lot, seeing as I effin love your writing. No joke, NPSST is on my phone's bookmarks :P
Thankyoouuu c:Too Damn Pretty
(#) BulletproofNinja 2012-08-07
YAY!!! There's gonna be more? This will make an awesome story, ill be sure to read it! Thankyou for saying that about my writing, it makes me feel all squishy inside! le thankyou
I can't wait for the next installment...
~BulletproofNinja xoToo Damn Pretty
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-08-07
Oh, please PLEASE tell me that there will be more. I need more! This is fantastic... just perfect. I'm craving more. Oh, please?Author's response
I've been meaning to reply to these for ages. Silly me forgot. Sorry, I get distracted easily. :P
And I can tell you, there will be more! As soon as my brain can think of where I want this to go. :D
Thanks a bunch, it means a lot. c:Too Damn Pretty
(#) cherise 2012-08-17
Please keep writing this! I loved this intro! I can see it being so freaking amazing!Author's response
I'm working! I'm so glad you like it.
Thankyou. Nice reviews make me so happy. c:Too Damn Pretty
(#) PartyPooperX 2012-08-18
that's horrible! the poor kid! what a selfish, evil, jealous prick!
yes, brilliantly written. starts off pretty nice and lighthearted and then suddenly chilling. keep going!Author's response
I knooow, what a fuckass.
Yes C'pn. As soon as I find a direction for this story, we'll set sail. :P
Thankyouverymuch. c:Too Damn Pretty
(#) electricviolence 2013-04-05
-sobs-
-SOBS-
SOOOOOOOOOBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBSAuthor's response
waaaaaaah.Too Damn Pretty
(#) HoneyImMagical 2013-04-06
That escalated quickly.
I really enjoyed this, very well written!
Nice job!Author's response
hey tiara, long time, no see! :D
thank you.Too Damn Pretty
(#) SyraStrange 2013-05-27
DUDE. DUDE! I TOTALLY RATED THIS AND FORGOT TO REVIEW, WHAT THE FUCK? I COULD'VE SWORN—?
Insane, fucked up, and descriptive, you, my friend, are playing up all my sweet spots. Dang. That's pretty rad.
-SAuthor's response
you're pretty rad. thank you.Too Damn Pretty
(#) BeccaIsNotOnFire 2013-05-27
DUDE I'M RATING THIS UP. It is an amazing piece of writing. I can't stop reading it.Author's response
thank you very much, honey. i'm glad you like it. c:Too Damn Pretty
(#) drtylttlscrt 2013-12-29
Strange what jealousy makes the common man do...
OMG I AM LIKE SOOOO PROUD OF MYSELF FOR COMING UP WITH THAT .-.
Well, looky here, we gots us two of the Seven Deadly Sins - envy and pride.
AWESOME FIC :D
P.S. I love the opening sentence of your response to what PartyPooperX said. I know, what a fuckass. I actually laughed XDAuthor's response
whoa I wrote those review responses forever ago
I'm glad you liked it.
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