- I'm still adoring this. Your take on Lupin was very good. I'm glad he has a friend like the Priest to help him. And living in 'the colonies' as a Muggle is probably about the best place for a registered British Werewolf. I also liked the way you used the goblins, that Alice was Harry's Godmother, and that there were 5 people who were supposed to decide on his placement if the godparents weren't available.
The line "how do children know if their childhood friend will still be the person they want to spend the rest of their life with once they grow up?" about made me cry. The fact that they bonded that way and all its possible ramifications brought back memories of my best male friend from childhood and of making my little brother and his little sister have mock weddings. (He'd play the minister, I'd dress her up etc.)
I'd feel sorry for the Dursleys with the wards falling except... they're the Dursleys. They're in dire need of family counseling if any family is.
(#) SpringRaine 2007-12-19I hope Harry gets to keep everything his parents wanted him to have. It's not right that he had to choose between going back to an abusive situation or loosing his inheritance. Just think of all the wacky things he and Luna could do when they're older if he still has the Potter money.
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