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Like Rain that Melts the Fallen Snow
4 reviewsLuna and Harry grow, learn, have fun, and go on some more vacations.
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Luna's Hubby
(#) telmah 2006-07-17
when I read the premise, I was sceptical. But after a couple of chapter I was hooked. I really am enjoying your story! Thank you for sharing your time and talent with us!
-TelmahLuna's Hubby
(#) saugart 2006-08-26
I so enjoy the story, that I am making a nit-picky little suggestion. You write:
Draco didn't mention that Harry
Lovegood was probably a Mudblood.
I think that, under the terminology they use, Harry is a "half-blood", having both non-pureblood wizards for ancestors. I think Mudblood is reserved for Witches and Wizards with no wizarding ancestry.
It's also possible that Draco doesn't know the terms yet. You might want to add a parenthetical comment, then ("Had his father known the details, he would have explained what it meant to be a half-blood", or something of the sort.)Luna's Hubby
(#) pdkirke 2007-03-12
You about had me crying several times during this chapter. I'm so glad Harry was able to save Selene. She's sweet and it would have been a horrid loss for the whole family if she had died. Nice touch making the healer McGonagall's son as well. Her conversation with Algie about the students' detentions was interesting; I liked his take on it.
I also like what you're doing with Draco and adjusting his attitudes a bit. I love Remus and the way you had Luna be the pebble that started the avalanche of freeing Sirius and catching Peter. Awesome. I also like that Neville is friendly with the kids.Luna's Hubby
(#) pdkirke 2007-03-12
You about had me crying several times during this chapter. I'm so glad Harry was able to save Selene. She's sweet and it would have been a horrid loss for the whole family if she had died. Nice touch making the healer McGonagall's son as well. Her conversation with Algie about the students' detentions was interesting; I liked his take on it.
I also like what you're doing with Draco and adjusting his attitudes a bit. I love Remus and the way you had Luna be the pebble that started the avalanche of freeing Sirius and catching Peter. Awesome. I also like that Neville is friendly with the kids.
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