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Goal Not Achieved

by Kaleidoscope_Eyes 1 review

Just a poem I wrote last year.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Published: 2012-09-17 - Updated: 2012-09-19 - 23 words - Complete

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Goal Not Achieved

(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-09-20

Nice. It was really short but worked that way. I like how the first two lines were single words and then you built up the rest, it made the last line really powerful.

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