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Harry Potter and the League of Shadows
2 reviewsHave started rewriting this story.Read how Harry Potter, or should I say Orion Black is being brought up the pureblood way by Sirius Black, his family. Good Voldemort! Dark, Political and Powerful ...
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Harry Potter and the League of Shadows
(#) COLD1 2012-11-05
Alrighty, your spacing sucks. I'll rid this one when you fix it lolHarry Potter and the League of Shadows
(#) tgfoy 2012-12-05
Nice start. There are clear formatting issues with this chapter such as lack of spacing and paragraphs. Interesting twists with the characters, compared with Canon which have left me looking forward to more and seeing where you take this.
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