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Albus' First Day I
(#) COLD1 2012-10-21
I've taken shits that cover more of a page than your chapters. Good job!Albus' First Day I
(#) jon08 2012-10-24
Not a bad start, shows some promise.
I do hope you can make your chapters a little longer though.
Look forward to future updates.
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