by baka_neko 1 reviewKwaidan: Stories or studies of strange things.
Category: Drama - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Published: 2006-07-18 - Updated: 2006-07-19 - 1000 words - Complete
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(#) Rous 2007-02-15
This is an interesting premise. However, there is confusion at times as to who is speaking and to whom. This is particularly evident in the final scene. It would not be hard to remedy this. I truly think this could be a really good tale.
Thank you for sharing.
rous
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