Categories > Movies > Star Wars > A Queen Cried
A Queen Cried
6 reviewsHe had, in a dark corner of his mind, wondered if everyone he cared about would die, and the last thing he would hear from them would be a plea for Anakin. A plea to save him. For he knew he would ...
2Boring
Reviews
A Queen Cried
(#) JesusKetchum31 2005-07-02
And this fic reminds me of why I always liked Obi-Wan... that is, I identify with him. This is absolutely beautiful. However, it's also absolutely riddled with distracting typos. You should consider getting a beta reader to catch that stuff. Still, good job.A Queen Cried
(#) SkywalkerChild 2005-08-18
You know, I only read the summary, so I thought I was going to get an Anakin/Vader dynamic. If only I'd read the characters in question...still, I liked it. Although not Obidala myself, I understand it. A few typos here and there, but otherwise a well put together and touching story.A Queen Cried
(#) kenobifan 2006-10-19
Will you write more Obidala? Please!!Author's response
I will try my darnedest! Being busy sucks. :)
Sign up to review this story.