Categories > Original > Horror > Heaven
--- SCENE ONE ---
[We see smoke bellowing from below the cellar, we slowy walk downstairs to see a rather obese man chuckling with a croaky voice as he looks on at a cage]
Obese Man: (Chuckles) Well my pet, time for another wish, I promise this time I will release you.
[The unseen creature rattles the cage in anger]
Obese Man: [Chokes] What? (Shouts) Grant It Now!
[Silence fills the room and strange lights appear around the obese man. He begins to lose weight rapidly and his hair grows]
Young Man: And to think I was going to set you free (laughs, this time without the smokers cough)
[We then see the man proceed to walk back upstairs and the light switches off. We are left to see the glowing yellow eyes of the creature in the cage - FADE TO BLACK]
--- SCENE TWO ---
[We now see a large estate and a large black car making it's way along the driveway. The words "2006 Present Day" appear.]
Voice from Car Window: Is my father inside Rathbone?
[A rather smartly dressed man approaches the car and responds to the question]
Rathbone: Yes Sir, he wishes to speak with you immidiatly Master Milton
Milton: Thank you Rathbone, and please, call me Michael
Rathbone: As you wish "Sir" (Both Smile)
[Michael makes his way up to the entrance of the mantion. We now see from the inside and Michael opens then closes the door and runs quickly upstairs and enters his father's room]
Michael: (Slightly out of breath)Dad, I came as quick as I could. Is there anything you need?
Father: (Coughs) Yes, could you (coughs) take me to the cellar, I have some things I want to do down there...alone!
Michael: OK, Right away (Shouts) Rathbone! Wheelchair!
Rathbone: Yes Sir
[Rathbone closes door then almost immediately returns with the wheelchair. Both Michael and his father look on in amazment]
Rathbone: I Eat My Greens, Sir!
[Cut to next scene]
--- SCENE THREE ---
[We see the Michael and his father making their way down the stone steps to the cellar floor. We see it is newly refurbished and now acts a study. A large picture of a falling angel can be seen hanging on the wall]
Father: Now can you leave me, I wish to be left alone for a moment, I will call you when I am ready to leave.
[Michael nods and leaves quietly]
Father: Now (chuckles) we can get to business.
[He wheels toward a locked draw and unlocks it with a key in his pocket. He then pulls out a keycard and swipes it through a hidden box behind the angel picture. A large opening appears, there is a cage and what looks like a body double of himself]
Father: Well hello there, it's been a while (laughs) now I am growing tired and have decided that I will set you free after one final wish.
[The creature sighs and then begins to grant the wish. The body double floats toward a noose and chair afterwhich the chair falls and the lifeless body hangs. We now see an empty wheelchair and a tall young man standing beside it]
Father: Are you always THIS gullable? Pfft, enjoy your stay!
Creature: Your day of judgement will come Maxwell Milton. You will die and not even I can stop what I see coming for you!
Maxwell: (Shouts) DID I SAY YOU COULD SPEAK!
[Maxwell presses a button that sends elecric currents through the cage shocking the creature inside]
Maxwell: See ya in about 40 years [chuckles]
[The wall slides back into place and the picture returns to it's original position. Maxwell then opens a secret hatch to escape then shouts for his son]
Maxwell: Oh Michael, you can come down now (grins and laughs all the way down)
[Michael makes his way down to see his "father" hanging from the ceiling fixture. All that can be heard is the rope as it swings before Michael screams. Rathbone drops the tea tray and runs downstairs to see Michael on the floor, he comforts him - Fade to White]
End of Chapter One
[We see smoke bellowing from below the cellar, we slowy walk downstairs to see a rather obese man chuckling with a croaky voice as he looks on at a cage]
Obese Man: (Chuckles) Well my pet, time for another wish, I promise this time I will release you.
[The unseen creature rattles the cage in anger]
Obese Man: [Chokes] What? (Shouts) Grant It Now!
[Silence fills the room and strange lights appear around the obese man. He begins to lose weight rapidly and his hair grows]
Young Man: And to think I was going to set you free (laughs, this time without the smokers cough)
[We then see the man proceed to walk back upstairs and the light switches off. We are left to see the glowing yellow eyes of the creature in the cage - FADE TO BLACK]
--- SCENE TWO ---
[We now see a large estate and a large black car making it's way along the driveway. The words "2006 Present Day" appear.]
Voice from Car Window: Is my father inside Rathbone?
[A rather smartly dressed man approaches the car and responds to the question]
Rathbone: Yes Sir, he wishes to speak with you immidiatly Master Milton
Milton: Thank you Rathbone, and please, call me Michael
Rathbone: As you wish "Sir" (Both Smile)
[Michael makes his way up to the entrance of the mantion. We now see from the inside and Michael opens then closes the door and runs quickly upstairs and enters his father's room]
Michael: (Slightly out of breath)Dad, I came as quick as I could. Is there anything you need?
Father: (Coughs) Yes, could you (coughs) take me to the cellar, I have some things I want to do down there...alone!
Michael: OK, Right away (Shouts) Rathbone! Wheelchair!
Rathbone: Yes Sir
[Rathbone closes door then almost immediately returns with the wheelchair. Both Michael and his father look on in amazment]
Rathbone: I Eat My Greens, Sir!
[Cut to next scene]
--- SCENE THREE ---
[We see the Michael and his father making their way down the stone steps to the cellar floor. We see it is newly refurbished and now acts a study. A large picture of a falling angel can be seen hanging on the wall]
Father: Now can you leave me, I wish to be left alone for a moment, I will call you when I am ready to leave.
[Michael nods and leaves quietly]
Father: Now (chuckles) we can get to business.
[He wheels toward a locked draw and unlocks it with a key in his pocket. He then pulls out a keycard and swipes it through a hidden box behind the angel picture. A large opening appears, there is a cage and what looks like a body double of himself]
Father: Well hello there, it's been a while (laughs) now I am growing tired and have decided that I will set you free after one final wish.
[The creature sighs and then begins to grant the wish. The body double floats toward a noose and chair afterwhich the chair falls and the lifeless body hangs. We now see an empty wheelchair and a tall young man standing beside it]
Father: Are you always THIS gullable? Pfft, enjoy your stay!
Creature: Your day of judgement will come Maxwell Milton. You will die and not even I can stop what I see coming for you!
Maxwell: (Shouts) DID I SAY YOU COULD SPEAK!
[Maxwell presses a button that sends elecric currents through the cage shocking the creature inside]
Maxwell: See ya in about 40 years [chuckles]
[The wall slides back into place and the picture returns to it's original position. Maxwell then opens a secret hatch to escape then shouts for his son]
Maxwell: Oh Michael, you can come down now (grins and laughs all the way down)
[Michael makes his way down to see his "father" hanging from the ceiling fixture. All that can be heard is the rope as it swings before Michael screams. Rathbone drops the tea tray and runs downstairs to see Michael on the floor, he comforts him - Fade to White]
End of Chapter One
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