The Last Battle has been fought, and Harry Potter has won. The price, however, has been high. Nearly every person Harry cared for is dead, maimed, or otherwise injured. The magical culture of Bri...
Very interesting chapter! Love it! More soon, please! :)
Good work with Ron.
My favorite aspect of this chapter was the small fact that both Slytherins dueled fairly. To be fair, neither really had the opportunity to do anything else...but still...
This is a brilliant story. Thanks!
Still another excellent chapter. I would like to be able to give you some advice to help you improve, but I really don't know what I would have done differently. I like this has been going.
Oh, cool, shielding... Now we will see what else he can or will do, teleporting he can, he can fire photon torpedo's (hexes) What more would make him simular to the NC-1701?
OUTSTANDING...nothing more is needed to be said about this awesome story, do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
(#) Mr7 2006-07-21
excellent chapter, awesome idea with the passive shield. keep it up, I hope you update soon.
You write: "she wouldn't fair much better".
You mean "she wouldn't fare much better".
Thanks for writing.
Brilliant, very well done.
Wow, this chapter really showed Ron's good side. Yes, he can be childish and stubborn, but he's still in the process of growing up and not unreasonable. And he can be a good friend.
It also shows Harry is really good with people :) He's certainly suited for leadership.
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