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• Give It Your Best Shot

  (#) mrpietan 2012-12-01

  hmm, only a small nit... the merge, I would have liked to "see" a bit more, but over all, chuckle, keeping it like it is adds a bit of mystery to it. Although, I think you might want to have Harry (when he has time) go through his memories and getting them sorted out.... he might want to throw out the "unusable" stuff....
  
  I look forward to reading the next chapter.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review. New chapter up.

• Give It Your Best Shot

  (#) lleon 2013-08-06

  Not much to say really, decent chapter.
  Seems Harry is gonna need a new wand.

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