- This story has always been a favorite of mine, and it's the first one of yours that I had ever read. It's so hard to find a good story that captures the friendship between Lina and Zel and I like how you also show the subtle progression in Zel's relationship with Amelia and the leap in Lina and Gourry's. The last line about how jellyfish may float through life, but they never float alone, is one of my absolute favorite in any fanfic.
(#) noseless_wonder 2006-08-14I loved it. You covered a lot of story in a very short space. It wasn't boring, but it wasn't too fast and choppy either. The timing was perfect. The use of Lina and Zelgadis was wonderfully original and I loved the way you portrayed their friendship.
Sign up to review this story.