Scene by a lake; any lake. "You shouldn't drink so much," Kantarou said, and refilled Haruka's bowl.
(#) LBx 2006-02-20
I really like your characterization of Kantarou, it fits perfectly with his anime personality :)
Mm...not bad at all. I like the part where Kantaro said that th minor youkai wasn't supposed to ear living people's heads nor dead drunk people's head...that was a good joke. ^^
Interesting beginning, great tension at the end. Will there be more of these two from you? I hope so.
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