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Give It Your Best Shot
(#) banner 2013-02-21
I liked the descriptions in this chapter. You managed to make me see it all, without feeling as if I'd been bogged down in detail.Give It Your Best Shot
(#) raitono 2013-02-22
I agree with banner. Your attention to detail is great. I only wish you hadn't included the last two paragraphs. It seems to be a good stopping point right as he pushes off the wall, where it ends now feels like it stops in the middle of a thought. Maybe it's just my preference though. Otherwise, good chapter. I'm really enjoying this story.Give It Your Best Shot
(#) mrpietan 2013-02-23
An excellent chapter and very appreciative to see it's posting. I look forward to the next installment.Give It Your Best Shot
(#) TheResident 2013-03-03
I have enjoyed this story to this point and eagerly look forward to future chapters. I find it unique and considering the amount of HP fanfiction I have read, that is a major accomplishment. Keep up the great work and I hope you will be able to update soon.Give It Your Best Shot
(#) lleon 2013-08-06
From one battlefield to the next, and the political arena is definitely a battle.
How will Neville, The-Boy-Who-Lived take his attempt to garner attention away from him though.
Harry is definitely looking to make a splash and Neville seems to have grown in a wizarding society which has worshiped him since he was born.
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