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(Please check back to chapter one if you read it before guys, its been changed)
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Revenge Artist
(#) MCR-99 2013-03-02
Ooh! Drama!
I like this,it's really well written,and I can almost picture the manor in my head.I've read both chapters and I'm really enjoying the story.
Update it soon?Revenge Artist
(#) monstrice901 2013-03-30
Because I'm an idiot, I ignored the AN saying to check back to the previous chapter, so got very confused. To be honest though, I do think it's better without the ending to that chapter - as much as I may have agreed with King's rant, it was unfeasible that he could have pulled that off and got away.
Loving the new chapter as of yet, and I really want to find out more about King! He's deranged and it's brilliant - he's really detached in this chapter, but in the previous one he was getting all riled up and passionate about his killing.
I cannot wait to see how this develops, so pleaseplease update soon!
Sx
(P.S. Completely random, but I thought I'd throw this in there, but when you mentioned 'Matt', I was picturing Matt Tuck from BFMV)Author's response
Ah I'm really glad you think the first chapter is better now. I felt like the ending was just over doing it a bit too... just filling up the word count which is something I'm trying to stop myself from doing :')
King is certainly shaping up to become one of my favourite original characters, I can't wait to see how he develops too since... I don't even know myself :')
Haha when I picked Matt as a name I did automatically think about Matt Sanders but sadly he wont be featuring in this xD
xo
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