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• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) knothead 2013-04-06

  Frankly, Chapter 9 is pretty weak. Just one conversation?
  
  I have the feeling it was longer but didn't work so you cut it down to this to set up the next installment; however, the lack of depth hurts here as well. Maybe you should have attached this to whatever your next chapter is about?

  Author's response

  You are correct in that about half was cut out. I was trying to meet a self imposed deadline and probably should have waited. I think I'll add the next chapter to the end of this one when it is finished.

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) knothead 2013-04-06

  For purposes of comparison, your other chapters are better.

  Author's response

  Thank you for commenting!
  I'll try to make the next one better.

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) akasanta 2013-04-14

  Like your story a lot. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.
  
  Cheers!
  
  AKASANTA :D

  Author's response

  Thank you for commenting! I hope you'll like the next chapter too!

• A Different Sort of Bond

  (#) deathangel 2013-05-07

  I recently came across your story and frankly, I love it. :) It is an unusual setup and very different from what has been done before. Looking forward to reading the whole of this one and many more like it!

  Author's response

  Thank you!

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